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project_junky
4/27/2012 8:58:15 AM

Lyrics posted for Blue.

SCARS

Break me down and take another piece of me.
The kids are in the back now trying to sleep.
And everyone they like someone that's weak.
That's why you blame this all on me.

And I'm so blind to see
How you like to watch me bleed.

I think I've gone way beyond the end.

You know that you keep pushing me down
I keep trying to hide it.
But behind it all
you know it hurts to fall.

I lay down my broken heart
I don't want to be here any more.
I think I've seen to many scars.

Let's justify this with insaneness .
Ride the pain right down to the core.
Everyday day I've tried to save this.
But I can't go another more.

I think I've gone way beyond the end.

You know that you keep pushing me down
I keep trying to hide it.
But behind it all
you know it hurts to fall.

I lay down my broken heart
I don't want to be here any more.
I think I've seen to many scars.

I lay down my broken heart
I don't want to be here any more.
I think I've seen to many scars.
project_junky
4/26/2012 9:34:13 PM

project_junky has uploaded a new Mix with the title Scars no Vox.
File Description:Scars Just the music / structure.. I can add more strings and stuff after who ever puts vocals down. (Or Blue can) :).
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project_junky
4/26/2012 9:32:05 PM

project_junky has uploaded a new Mix with the title Scars with vox.
File Description:Scars with vox (just concept) nothing is in stone.
Files:

project_junky
4/26/2012 9:30:18 PM

project_junky has deleted the following item from the workspace: Scars Song Concept
project_junky
4/26/2012 9:30:06 PM

project_junky has deleted the following item from the workspace: new structure
project_junky
4/22/2012 9:49:55 PM

project_junky has uploaded a new Idea with the title new structure.
File Description:I looped the chorus and did this by cut and paste from older version. Now it's a normal song. I don't have 2nd verse yet... Of course the second chorus should have more build.. This is just a structure. Let me know whatcha think :).
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project_junky
4/22/2012 9:48:47 PM

project_junky has deleted the following item from the workspace: New Structure
project_junky
4/22/2012 9:47:50 PM

project_junky has uploaded a new ProjectConcept with the title New Structure.
File Description:I looped the chorus and did this by cut and paste from older version. Now it's a normal song. I don't have 2nd verse yet... Of course the second chorus should have more build.. This is just a structure. Let me know whatcha think :).
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project_junky
4/20/2012 3:57:17 PM

Me agree 110%. We think a alike.. already have that done :)
Bluemeanie72
4/20/2012 3:47:59 PM

Listening through again - shoot me if im talking out of place - but to like "pop" this song up a little it needs a recognisable chorus - one starts at the "keep pushing me" bit - and it feels (to me anyway) that it should repeat again to really hammer home the chorus but it goes off somewhere else. Im thinking that you should double up those parts to make the catchy chorus
project_junky
4/19/2012 7:10:52 AM

Ok...  I'm going to rearrange this.  When done, I'll post chords and tracks :)  Give me a day or two...
Bluemeanie72
4/18/2012 9:18:57 AM

no no i meant that it starts to confuse me a little as the chords get more complex in thier pattern

I do really like the track - although the chorus doesnt jump out at me yet - i think that can be fixed in the structuring


project_junky
4/18/2012 9:13:53 AM

Blue - When you say that "the structure really starts to lose me as it goes on" does that mean chord wise or interest wise ?   I might of over stretched the comfort zone by trying to add the girl voice section.

Since I'm going to rearrange it, let me know if there's something you like or don't like and input so I can move the puzzle pieces around.  :)
project_junky
4/18/2012 9:03:53 AM

Not at the keys now.  I'll try and post the chords in a couple of hours.  Umm You do know I play by ears and got in trouble last time I posted chords :)

I think I going to rearrange things a bit..  I don't think I like the structure but I thing the "blocks" are there.  I also think the girl voice should go...  I thought it was cool but I think it distracts.  I'm thinking of coping the piano intro solo there.

What do you think...  Is the structure to bizarre or does it make sense... ?
Bluemeanie72
4/18/2012 8:32:04 AM

the structure really starts to lose me as it goes on ! ! :( grrrrrr
tiffers1982
4/18/2012 6:34:29 AM

Sounds good!
project_junky
4/18/2012 5:02:28 AM

Lyrics so far..  (made them up last night so they'll change a bit)

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Break me down and take another piece of me.
Kids are in the back now trying to sleep
Everyone they like someone that's weak.
That's why you blame this all on me.
cause I'm so blind to see....
how you like to watch me bleed.

I think I've gone way beyond the end.

You know that.

You keep pushing me down
I keep trying to hide it.
But behind it all,
you know it hurts to fall.

I lay down my broken heart.
I don't want to be here anymore.
I think I've seen to many scars.
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Innocent child's voice..
La la's
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I lay down my broken heart.
I don't want to be here
I think I've seen to many scars.
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project_junky
4/18/2012 4:38:44 AM

I think I need to restructure it to sound more mainstream but I have the verse / bridge / chorus pieces in there so I can either redo or chop at it...

I'm gong to let it sit for a day to hear it and then redo..

I'll post indie tracks hopefully tonight.
Bluemeanie72
4/18/2012 2:16:06 AM

Yeah i like that! Ill get on it
project_junky
4/17/2012 11:35:10 PM

project_junky has updated the song concept.

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