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9/25/2015 10:39:57 PM

I might publish this song as complete, I collaborated with henkjan, he says it takes a year or more to full complete a song so its best to just publish it as it is in the meantime and it can be re-published if it gets worked on more.  Are you happy with the last track you posted or do you want me to change anything about the guitars? If not I can publish it.
7/3/2015 12:07:36 PM

I revised the guitar track, taking out the buzzing at the beginning and end, or what I could of it, and tried to reduce the buzzing noise during the track, can still hear it though.
6/21/2015 8:57:56 AM

Echo or not, it sounds good and flows well with the song.  The website seems to be working for me now which is cool, wouldn't let me login for awhile there.
5/2/2015 8:29:43 PM

Here's an updated version. I changed a few lyrics, made the opening verse sound a little less awkward (still feels a little awkward at the open to me, but for now It will do.) I left off the echo effect on the vocals, but left the right and left channel vocal tracks to flesh it out in places.

My main issue with the echo was even though I liked it in context with the sound of the rest of the song, it seemed to accentuate the S and T sounds too much. My microphone is just an old instrument mic, with no pop shield or anything.

5/1/2015 2:57:51 PM

Cool- glad you like it! I want to re-do the vocals/lyrics a bit today or tomorrow (whenever I have time,) there's a couple spots that make me flinch.

Might try to throw in some synths somewhere down the line. If I'm feeling brave I might revisit the bass and see if I can work something in.

5/1/2015 4:59:13 AM

This sounds amazing, the drums are better then anything I could work up at the moment, and your vocals sound great on this track.  All of it fits nicely I feel.
4/30/2015 6:35:05 PM

I could also upload the track with the added beat only (minus vocals) if you want to hear that by itself.

Either way, thanks for letting me jam along. Please, please feel free to (constructively) critique.

4/30/2015 6:31:34 PM

Hey, I really dug the guitar work. Hope you don't mind, I took a crack at adding a beat (unfortunately with synth drums,) and a a few vocal tracks. I tried adding a bass track, but I couldn't get the tuning right (I just have one of those cheapy tuners, and trying to do it by ear only proved to me that I really need new strings.) On second listen, though, there's plenty of guitar on the low end, so I didn't feel like it was really missing it.

There's a couple awkward spots in my vocals -need to rework lyrics to fit better- and I'm not 100% sure I like the leveling overall,  but I figured for a scratch track, it would be enough to see if you liked it or wanted to try something else or even go with someone else. If you want any of the vocal tracks separately (for leveling or whatnot) feel free to ask. I (stupidly) didn't save the beat track separate, but could probably recreate easily enough, or fidget with it if you want to try something else.
4/13/2015 11:07:46 PM

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4/13/2015 7:35:17 PM

kryptic2096 has updated the song concept.

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