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Henkjan
5/8/2018 5:55:30 AM

Larszzz; can you tell a bit more about Nicole for giving the credits (mention name in publications) .
Is she from USA? What State?Does she have a profile on Myonlineband or does she have a website/you tube channel/soundcloud page/etc. ? 
Did she also create her melody? Did she use a melody from djRF1?
She did a great job.
Normally i also give credits to contributors who inspired or activated us like djRF1.
Even if they are not on the end mix they stimulated the process of song writing, mixing, mastering. 

Henkjan
5/8/2018 2:03:31 AM

Master with vocals Nicole



Henkjan
5/8/2018 12:06:52 AM

Nice result with the vocals of Nicole, also the instrumental is OK.
This is one of the diamonds i am hoping for when doing online projects.
Compliments to all!!! Great job/project.
Its a combination of quality, creativity and effort putitng in to it ...
the style and song should fit in what you like as musician/singer ...
that kind of click/affection with the project. 
Thus the end result is better than what you put in as an individual.

Sorry for the late reaction: i am very busy with live music: repetitions and concerts.

If someone likes to start a new project ... summer is coming and recording is nice than.
It always takes some time to make a song concept so ... when you start now i can add in july/august.
I can give some comment on first versions if you like. Or perhaps upload some inspiration. 

This song was prepared and structured very well: compliments. 
Than i can make a quality and inspired drumtrack.

Larszzz
12/14/2017 3:49:42 AM

Here's a mix with Nicole and an instrumental mix if you want to mix the two vocals (That's beyond my abilities)





djRF1
12/9/2017 9:15:18 AM

What's the next step for this song?  Is it going to be published?   Also, I am looking for people who would like to collaborate on videos. Short 4min segments for some of my songs.  Anyone interested or if you know someone who is, contact me.  bizadventures@vermontel.net   
Larszzz
11/25/2017 11:43:23 PM

nicole vocals






Larszzz
11/25/2017 11:40:42 PM

DJ vocals






Larszzz
11/25/2017 11:39:39 PM

Here's a way better mix (I think) without vocals



djRF1
11/24/2017 8:43:32 AM

OK mix.  I was working on that myself.  It takes a bit of magic to put 2 people in sync on a one time shot.  1 thought.  Give me some effects. I'm too raw against her soft tone.  Also, could you give me the tracks; instruments, her vocal and mine?  I would like to take a shot at it!           
Larszzz
11/24/2017 7:14:40 AM

Here's the 1st version of the track. Comments? Suggestions for changes?



Larszzz
11/17/2017 9:56:36 AM

Would it take a lot of work for you to re-record the choruses? I think it would sound really good if you both sang on the chorus, but right now your takes on the melody are a little bit too different for it to work and as I said changing hers is not an option 



Larszzz
11/17/2017 7:25:05 AM

Unfortunately the vocals can't be redone.. Nicole is a friend of friend of a friend of mine and I persuaded her to do a take only after a couple of drinks, so this is it
djRF1
11/17/2017 6:58:58 AM

O' the same with "they are" .  It should be  "they're".  Sorry about that.  It's this proper college writing thing from business courses.   I'm sure if she goes through it a few more times she'll smooth right in there using more of her own expression.      
djRF1
11/17/2017 6:48:36 AM

RF here, That' s great.  1 comment, use there's,  and not "there is".  I don't often write things the way I sing them.  I suggest singing it in your own dialogue.  The verbatim is too stuffy!        


Larszzz
11/17/2017 5:53:18 AM

Here's a version with nicole singing. As suggested, I'll do a couple of different combinations of djRF1 and her, and then we can decide which version we prefer 



djRF1
11/14/2017 1:04:47 PM

Any way.  The verses & the chorus can be a duet or switched between the different vocalists.  I would try a complete duet mix first. Next, I would try a female for the verses and both vocalists for the chorus.  Then, I would try a male on the verses and both vocalists for the chorus. Let everyone choose the one they like best.    


Larszzz
11/14/2017 12:44:32 PM

a duet might be a good idea. Any thoughts on how the parts should be divided?
djRF1
11/12/2017 12:32:51 PM

Thanks for adding me as a contributor.  I would like to here a female ad a vocal track or male & female  mix. 
Henkjan
11/12/2017 12:22:49 PM

With the clean vocals the song has more power i think. 
All tracks are balanced in the mix. 
Compliment, nice overall sound.

Larszzz
11/7/2017 9:01:05 AM

I put djRF1's vocal together with HenkJan's drums 




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