9/26/2017 2:08:26 AM
Hi my friends
Maybe we should finalise the latest version then move onto the next faze
I think The Beubi version very good I believe the song means something personal to him and he has produced an excellent song
Maybe Im a little biased having contributed to some of the lyrics
I do love the original music which is brilliant and I think a variety of lyrics could be written within it
Power to your Music
Mike from Versewithfriends
9/26/2017 12:34:11 AM
Hi WarmGravy. Hmmmmm, very different from what Versewithfriends and me came up with :-)
I had a quick browse through the work of wholetone and liked his work. However, I am NOT wholetone and am afraid that I can not make the song sound like him :-)
How do you want to proceed with this song? I don't mind if you want to stick to the original lyrics and melody line..just let me know. I also don't mind you saying if my voice/ideas do not fit with what you want with the song. I am not a singer either but if you want (and you send me the lyrics) I can have a go at it...up to you :-)
9/25/2017 8:49:24 PM
Bah! ...no link.
9/25/2017 8:42:04 PM
...Loose adaptation of lyrics and VERY loose melody. I'd really like the melody to remain somewhat intact. I can't imagine this song not having that melody in it somewhere. Tiffers1984 did vocals for a different musical version of this song. I'll see if I can post a link.
9/25/2017 8:32:26 PM
#1... I am NOT a singer. This is a loose adaptation of the original lyrics from wholetone. I always thought his lyrics/vocals were amazing. See what it inspires.
9/10/2017 5:37:08 AM
Just a slight improvement on last upload
Beautiful original instrumental from WarmGravy
TheBeubi doing a great job adapting to his own style.
I was glad adding in a few lyrics here and there This is just a remix idea if the final track is to be used commercially in the future
As I always say Nothing set in stone
Mike from Versewithfriends
9/10/2017 3:39:53 AM
9/9/2017 1:06:45 PM
Promised Versewithfriends to upload what I have done sofar. Hope it is going into the right direction?!
9/5/2017 2:44:23 PM
I like what you've come up with. I'd like to add some lines that were part of the original concept. I'll try to make a sample in the next few days.
8/30/2017 11:32:30 PM
Hi Versewithfriends (and all),
Let me know what you think! We have been exchanging some great ideas and what is left is as close to what I feel when I recorded the first two lines at the beginning of this song. Hope you like it too and if you all agree I'll try to get it down this WE. Looking forward to your comments & suggestions.
Have a great day!
8/29/2017 8:56:00 AM
Suggested lyrics version 2
Nothing set in stone
8/29/2017 4:54:56 AM
Guess I was a little hasty with publishing the original. Good to see you back!
8/28/2017 10:21:22 PM
Hello Gravy. Interesting to see the spin off of the Floyding Around track. Some great ideas floating here!
8/21/2017 12:27:52 AM
Just listened to your latest version
I like what you have done Sounds good to me
I will play it a lot more later and try to get into the story this disturbed guy is trying to convey to the world Maybe I can then contribute more
Interesting to see where it goes
8/20/2017 11:20:51 PM
Hi Mike (Versewithfriends),
I liked your verse and incorporated it into the song. Hope you like what I did to it. I'm not sure what to do with the piece after this. It is still a long way before the instrumental parts starts. Don't want to drag it out too long. People might get bored with my voice if they have to listen to it for too long :-). Maybe after the verse we could go back to the sad/depressed male voice from the beginning of the song and let him explain the troubles that he has followed by one more up-lifting verse followed by the instrumental parts. WarmGravy, what do you think?
Looking forward to your comments and suggestions!
8/17/2017 5:02:50 AM
A couple of verses that might suit
Mike from versewithfriends
8/17/2017 12:34:29 AM
I am currently working on the lyrics and recording some vocals but any input (both vocal and lyrics) is greatly appreciated!
8/16/2017 12:52:26 PM
brings to mind a friend of mine no longer with us
8/14/2017 11:01:17 PM
8/14/2017 9:15:11 AM
Spun off a new workspace based on a file from the workspaces Floyding Around
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