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WarmGravy
11/6/2017 6:05:42 PM

And you can delete all the seps if you need to.
WarmGravy
11/6/2017 6:04:13 PM

Good luck!  And remember... it's about loss and regret. (At least that's what I had going on in my head.) :)
TheBeubi
11/6/2017 8:16:58 AM

This helps a lot guys!
Versewithfriends
11/6/2017 7:51:53 AM

Looks good so far 
Lyric idea 
Have a look at 
See if they suit
Mike




WarmGravy
11/6/2017 5:13:58 AM

1:54 - 2:22 had some "oohh's and ahhh's" accompanying the music. The general idea as far as inflection is to match the intensity of the music.  
WarmGravy
11/6/2017 5:08:42 AM

This is just a structure idea to start with. Levels and timing aren't perfect, but that's not the goal right now. I guess we need more lyrics, eh?



TheBeubi
10/31/2017 9:18:15 AM

Let me know how you would like to structure the rest of the song. There are some strong instrumental parts so I would need some guidance in how to arrange the lyrics around them. Also help with lyrics is appreciated. I just sang what came up spontaneously with no end-point in mind..as usual :-).



















Versewithfriends
10/30/2017 2:00:40 PM

Whatever you sing Beubi my friend is Ok with me
Power to the Music Guys
Mike


WarmGravy
10/30/2017 5:57:24 AM

You nailed it! 100% ! Upload the seps dry and I'll put the parts that are done in place. Then we can go from there. Nice job !
TheBeubi
10/30/2017 2:47:55 AM

Hi Warmgravy and Mike!

Took onboard all your comments and suggestions and decided to generate a new version using Warmgravy's version as reference. Unfortunately, some parts of the vocals were not audible enough for me so I filled in the blanks with my own creation :-) This is just a rough idea but before I continue working on this project I need some feedback from Warmgravy. I know that some song-types are not compatible with my voice so if you think that this is the case for this project then tell me. As much as I like this song...some thing are just not meant to be :-). Looking forward to your response!!    






Versewithfriends
10/11/2017 2:09:03 PM

Hi Guys
I love this song 
The music is brilliant Warm Gravy, I go to bed with it in my head and wake up next morning with it still there
Beubi the vocals are great
So I tweaked the mix one more time
I know it does not use the full 6 mins plus of the instrumental that our friend Warm Gravy uploaded but as a derivative work it captures the beautiful melody from within it
I guess as a purist You can shudder at the chopping and changing of the original concept uploaded
The Beubi does a great job on the vocals
But I have rearranged his recording here and there
Hope he wont mind me doing this
So I rest my case regards to the latest arrangement, 
As I say again Its a great song But if it offends or its not what is wanted I will remove it
Thanks for allowing me to participate on this project
Mike  from Versewithfriends





WarmGravy
10/3/2017 7:44:43 PM

Thanks Mike...me too! I'm gonna remove my awful voice from the project now. So bad!
Versewithfriends
9/30/2017 11:47:20 AM

Still a great Instrumental Warm Gravy
Hope The Beubi brings the vocals to life for you. He can sing
Power to the Music
Mike from Versewithfriends

TheBeubi
9/28/2017 11:16:15 PM

Thank you :-) !
WarmGravy
9/28/2017 4:44:20 PM

...cause you asked so nicely.



WarmGravy
9/26/2017 7:10:12 AM

You guys have at it. It was just an idea. Don't worry about it....really. You guys are doing great.
TheBeubi
9/26/2017 12:34:11 AM

Hi WarmGravy. Hmmmmm, very different from what Versewithfriends and me came up with :-)

I had a quick browse through the work of wholetone and liked his work. However, I am NOT wholetone and am afraid that I can not make the song sound like him :-)

How do you want to proceed with this song? I don't mind if you want to stick to the original lyrics and melody line..just let me know. I also don't mind you saying if my voice/ideas do not fit with what you want with the song. I am not a singer either but if you want (and you send me the lyrics) I can have a go at it...up to you :-)


WarmGravy
9/25/2017 8:49:24 PM

Bah! ...no link.
WarmGravy
9/25/2017 8:42:04 PM

...Loose adaptation of lyrics and VERY loose melody. I'd really like the melody to remain somewhat intact. I can't imagine this song not having that melody in it somewhere. Tiffers1984 did vocals for a different musical version of this song. I'll see if I can post a link.
WarmGravy
9/25/2017 8:32:26 PM

#1... I am NOT a singer. This is a loose adaptation of the original lyrics from wholetone. I always thought his lyrics/vocals were amazing. See what it inspires. 




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