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jfetter
1/27/2018 4:35:29 AM

Sorry about your computer, I know the feeling of losing data. Sounds good, maybe post a new track when you get time and include a 4 count lead-in and I'd definitely take a shot and upload a mix and isolated drum track! I like the sound and feel of this tune...
WarmGravy
1/22/2018 4:22:44 AM

@ jfetter....Unfortunately, all the seps for this one are gone forever. My system got hit by CryptoLocker virus a few years back and I lost almost everything. So this song is what it is. However, I wouldn't mind working on a new version with all new tracks.
WarmGravy
1/22/2018 4:18:18 AM

Overall...really nice job! It's starting to get tightened up. With only listening to it a few times, I picked up on a few things...

1:00 - 1:38 sounds a little rushed. Might just be me.

I'd like to hear some low key "Oohs and ahhs" between 1:54 - 2:22. Just as an undertone of color to the music. 
 
I think the lyrics from 3:19 - 3:48 make the section extremely busy. There's a lot going on with the music here already so you have to be careful what you add here. For this section, less is more. I'm gonna suggest trying the "Where are you now...." chorus part in that section. It's something the listener is already familiar with and would be less of a "burden" to listen to at that time. Not sure if "burden" is the right word, but it's an awful lot to take in all at once. 



Versewithfriends
1/22/2018 3:46:23 AM

Great Job Beubi...love it..
TheBeubi
1/21/2018 10:39:47 PM

Hi Warmgravy,

I had a closer look at your proposed vocal structure and incorporated your suggestions in this version. Thanks Versewithfriends for your help on the lyrics!!

 I truly hope you like it ;-)....it's killing me :-) Every time I say to myself "this is it...I'm not touching this beast again" I find myself drawn back to it in order to give it another go. If only the tune wasn't so damn good....

Beubi





jfetter
1/20/2018 2:04:43 AM

I'd love to jam to a Drumless version, either to submit as an alternate (wider dynamically) track or just for fun...
WarmGravy
1/10/2018 2:58:18 PM

I agree...it's getting there. Keep plugging away.


Versewithfriends
1/10/2018 3:41:31 AM

Getting there Beubi...nice one
Hope WarmGravy likes it

TheBeubi
1/9/2018 2:33:22 AM

Hi everybody,

I added some more vocals. Please let me know what you think! There are still a few gaps but due to the strong instrumentals I have a good feeling. Looking forward to your comments and suggestions! :-)

Thank you Mike for the lyrics! It gave me a spark of inspiration and hope to have moved this lovely project closer to completion. 





WarmGravy
11/6/2017 6:05:42 PM

And you can delete all the seps if you need to.
WarmGravy
11/6/2017 6:04:13 PM

Good luck!  And remember... it's about loss and regret. (At least that's what I had going on in my head.) :)
TheBeubi
11/6/2017 8:16:58 AM

This helps a lot guys!
Versewithfriends
11/6/2017 7:51:53 AM

Looks good so far 
Lyric idea 
Have a look at 
See if they suit
Mike




WarmGravy
11/6/2017 5:13:58 AM

1:54 - 2:22 had some "oohh's and ahhh's" accompanying the music. The general idea as far as inflection is to match the intensity of the music.  
WarmGravy
11/6/2017 5:08:42 AM

This is just a structure idea to start with. Levels and timing aren't perfect, but that's not the goal right now. I guess we need more lyrics, eh?



TheBeubi
10/31/2017 9:18:15 AM

Let me know how you would like to structure the rest of the song. There are some strong instrumental parts so I would need some guidance in how to arrange the lyrics around them. Also help with lyrics is appreciated. I just sang what came up spontaneously with no end-point in mind..as usual :-).



















Versewithfriends
10/30/2017 2:00:40 PM

Whatever you sing Beubi my friend is Ok with me
Power to the Music Guys
Mike


WarmGravy
10/30/2017 5:57:24 AM

You nailed it! 100% ! Upload the seps dry and I'll put the parts that are done in place. Then we can go from there. Nice job !
TheBeubi
10/30/2017 2:47:55 AM

Hi Warmgravy and Mike!

Took onboard all your comments and suggestions and decided to generate a new version using Warmgravy's version as reference. Unfortunately, some parts of the vocals were not audible enough for me so I filled in the blanks with my own creation :-) This is just a rough idea but before I continue working on this project I need some feedback from Warmgravy. I know that some song-types are not compatible with my voice so if you think that this is the case for this project then tell me. As much as I like this song...some thing are just not meant to be :-). Looking forward to your response!!    






Versewithfriends
10/11/2017 2:09:03 PM

Hi Guys
I love this song 
The music is brilliant Warm Gravy, I go to bed with it in my head and wake up next morning with it still there
Beubi the vocals are great
So I tweaked the mix one more time
I know it does not use the full 6 mins plus of the instrumental that our friend Warm Gravy uploaded but as a derivative work it captures the beautiful melody from within it
I guess as a purist You can shudder at the chopping and changing of the original concept uploaded
The Beubi does a great job on the vocals
But I have rearranged his recording here and there
Hope he wont mind me doing this
So I rest my case regards to the latest arrangement, 
As I say again Its a great song But if it offends or its not what is wanted I will remove it
Thanks for allowing me to participate on this project
Mike  from Versewithfriends






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