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4/20/2018 8:41:52 PM

A new drum track would be fantastic! That's the only thing that's be holding me back from doing a complete overhaul of this great tune.
4/19/2018 11:11:28 PM

Hi Henkjan,

Thank you for your feedback! I recorded this song 10 years ago :-) I managed to improve my equipment and recording skills a bit since then :-) If you help me with the drum-track I would be more than happy to start from scratch again.

4/19/2018 10:03:56 PM

I like this song and the sound and atmosphere. 

Sound, mix and melody etc. are OK.

Vocals can be improved they are not correct to pitch: 
the long/main  melody notes are correct but changing to another song part / the blues notes / passing notes are not OK to pitch; the half /whole steps are not exact.

Guitars/bass can be better tuned. Always use an electronic tuner and ...put some time precision in it befor every recording. 
Otherwise automatic pitch correction should be applied to the guitar/bass tracks.

If you have better pitch of  guitars/bass it also is more easy to optimise the pitch of your vocals.

Quality of recordings (noises/sound) is OK.

3/13/2018 7:50:23 AM

Hi. The chord progression is as follows
Am/Cmaj7 / Bbmaj7 /E7 /E 

2/19/2018 6:24:41 AM

Hello. Could you please share the chord sequence? I would lime to add some piano riffs. That's a nicesomg. 
12/5/2017 9:01:53 AM

That would be great! Thanks!
12/3/2017 4:19:57 PM

i think i could add a little piand riffs
10/31/2017 9:13:25 AM

Here you go! Have fun!!

10/30/2017 7:16:30 PM

Can you post seps of the drums and guitar? 
9/18/2017 9:37:42 AM

Magical 100 bpm.

9/18/2017 5:27:41 AM

What's the original BPM?
9/18/2017 5:20:31 AM

Aw hell... might as well start from scratch! Lol...
9/18/2017 5:19:57 AM

...and maybe a new bass track.
9/18/2017 5:19:10 AM

...and add some keyboards. 
9/18/2017 5:11:19 AM

Love this tune! It reminds me a little of "San Tropez" from Pink Floyd. Do you want me to mix it? The only thing I'd change with it is giving it a better guitar solo in the middle. 
9/18/2017 12:15:59 AM

A lyrical Idea that may fit the mood and meaning required

9/17/2017 11:50:25 PM

thebeubi has updated the song concept.

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