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4/19/2018 9:55:55 PM

Song has potential. I think redo the vocals will have most result.
- vocals are not correct to pitch (to low). 
  Often using automatic pitch correction will lead to distorted sounds. 
- sound, power and clarity of the lyrics can be imrpoved
- vocals are technically not optimum mixed

I think melody is OK. Did not listen to the lyrics but sound/rhytm is OK. 

Drums can be placed more subtle in the mix. Now they are dominating the sound.
With better vocals i think  they should have a place more towards the middle of the mix.

So i think finding a singer would be a solution. 

11/28/2017 6:42:11 AM

sure man... give it a go

11/25/2017 10:27:49 PM

Hey, are you still looking for some drum parts ? I can give it a try and you can then make the call
11/6/2017 8:07:29 PM

the only tracks you are missing are the drums I believe... I can link those files if you like

11/5/2017 5:33:45 PM

If you want, I will mix it for you. No creative foolishness. Post seps of final tracks and I'll make it sound great.

11/5/2017 5:28:43 PM

So what's the issue with clipping? Either you're going into your DAW too hot or you're coming out too hot. Most likely you're going in hot. If not, some VST effects boost gain when they are activated. Always mix at -10 db. When you like the mix, then boost it.

11/5/2017 2:40:09 PM

using Ardour... It's open source and very good
11/5/2017 1:26:03 PM

Hit me up when you want to work on the hip-hop piece. As far as your clipping problem, what DAW are you using?
11/5/2017 1:20:55 PM

Honestly, I'm pretty happy about the mix that I have now... I wish I could get the mix louder and not have clipping but I just don't have the skills to pull it off at this point. I like the overall levels and the effects that I'm using, although they are oversaturated and I don't really now how to dial it back now. It has the right feel to me just lacks that professional shine. @warmgravy I am going to start a new project with a rap/hip hop vibe to it if you want to participate I'll be uploading it shortly. Thanks for the input, and you are free to post any mixes you think are worth the time.
11/5/2017 12:44:09 PM

@ Obliv...Do you want to lean more towards a hip-hop vibe?
11/4/2017 3:20:20 AM

i wold like to be the song writer and have many songs to show but i dont know how to update them     help please :p
10/30/2017 9:46:46 PM

Obliviosity has updated the song concept.
10/30/2017 6:16:54 PM

Took some artistic a little carried away, perhaps.... lol.

10/30/2017 11:03:38 AM

Got em. 320k MP3 would have been fine too.
10/30/2017 10:41:48 AM

The files are too big to share here... you can download the stem <<<<<<<<<<<< there

10/30/2017 10:27:45 AM

will do... you want them as WAV? or is OGG or MP3 fine?

10/30/2017 6:20:11 AM

I saw you published it so I figured you were done. If you want me to mix it, upload your guitar seps and I'll see what I can do. 
10/21/2017 1:00:14 PM

Obliviosity has updated the song concept.
10/20/2017 8:47:28 AM

I still can let you try mixing it... it's not set in stone just yet

10/18/2017 6:37:35 PM

You should have let me try to mix it. It sounds super compressed and narrow. Maybe next time.

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