Song workspace for Better than a drink

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Kika6432
4/23/2018 10:42:43 PM

Again...no rush no worries. I myself have done my share of "taking a while" ;) I prefer we take a few months to make this song and for it to be perfect rather than rushing it and have a semi quality song! Hope your rush isn't too stressful...cheers :)
WarmGravy
4/23/2018 6:59:09 PM

Yeah...it's kinda in it's infancy right now. I agree with it needing to be a little faster. Like I said, I was tired but I wanted to share what I had. I just need more time which I have zero of right now. I really want to take this one where it needs to be. I can see it, I just need to make it happen.
Kika6432
4/21/2018 9:15:33 AM

Hi WarmGravy :)

Thanks for giving this one a try as well. My comment is the following:

Holy s*** I love the style of piano version you made! :) The only thing is...it is not inspiring me any kind of melody at the moment lol if you have suggestions go ahead! Can you add some kind of tiny beat to it? And maybe speed up the music by 2-3 bpm? 
Or if you keep the same style but maybe other piano chords...not sure...

Anyways...no rush for this one :)

Thanks again!

Kika

WarmGravy
4/20/2018 8:27:48 PM

I'm tired...so I'll give you what I got. 65 BPM (or 130)



WarmGravy
4/20/2018 4:50:59 PM

Wow...I feel stupid. I guess the scroll wheel on my mouse didn't get me to the bottom of the page. I'm just now seeing the Adele and Florence references for the mood. Please excuse my idiocity....smh
WarmGravy
4/20/2018 3:53:21 PM

This is just the first thing that came out. I have no idea what you had in mind for a mood so I'll just throw this out there.



Kika6432
4/11/2018 9:09:29 AM

kika6432 has updated the song workspace settings. The workspace title has been changed to Better than a drink
Kika6432
4/11/2018 9:06:59 AM

Alright well...here is an idea for the complete song:




Verse

There’s a raging fire in my heart

It is slowly tearing me apart

And to cool it off

It doesn’t take much

Just one drink, a few sips

 

Chorus

You are my lifeboat

When I feel I need saving

You are like a coat

When I feel I am freezing

You’re all that I want

You are tender and loving

You are better than a drink

 

Verse

The fire’s burning still

Careful not to spill

Though it feels like drowning

It is liberating

One more drink, a few more sips

 

Chorus

You are my lifeboat

When I feel I need saving

You are like a coat

When I feel I am freezing

You’re all that I want

You are tender and loving

You are better than a drink

 

Ad-lib

When my world is crumbling

I just close my eyes

And I just keep on waiting

For the next sunrise

I keep holding on, til you get here

 

Chorus

You are my lifeboat

When I feel I need saving

You are like a coat

When I feel I am freezing

You’re all that I want

You are tender and loving

You are better than a drink



Kika6432
4/11/2018 8:49:17 AM

Ok. Let's try to keep this one low pitch.
And I can always write about another subject if it can inspire you more.

TheBeubi
4/11/2018 8:27:22 AM

Nice! I'll digest the lyrics a bit and see if I can stick to the brief....or not :-)
Kika6432
4/11/2018 7:47:49 AM

Looking for style like:


When the world stops spinning (by Kyler England)
Never let me go (by Florence and the machine)
Skyfall (by Adele)

Kika6432
4/11/2018 7:39:07 AM

Hi Beubi,

See .doc file for lyrics that I wrote so far

Kika6432
4/11/2018 7:37:17 AM

kika6432 has updated the song concept.

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