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Shattered Image
5/23/2018 1:10:26 AM

Haven't forgotten, just been busy.
Versewithfriends
5/18/2018 9:14:39 AM

I have played Beubi's Contribution 
At first I was not to sure about what he had done
But changed my mind
Like it
Also the lyrical concept is my cup of tea
Nice one
Mike

TheBeubi
5/16/2018 11:45:50 AM

Looking forward to your suggestions. 
B.

Shattered Image
5/16/2018 4:25:34 AM

When it comes to music I'm happy to experiment. I'm not one to stick by the rules. As long as I like the sound or the feel I'm getting, I don't worry if it's "technically" correct.
I like to treat recording a bit like taking a picture. All the perfectly posed pictures in the world won't capture the same emotion as a candid shot at just the right place and time.

Shattered Image
5/16/2018 4:07:13 AM

I've forgotten the actual structure of the music, so I'll have more of a listen in my work van tomorrow while I'm driving. I'll see if I can come up with another verse, and if it needs any other lyrics. Then on the weekend I'll mess around on the keyboard, and guitar, and see if anything works. Feel free to do the same if you think you can come up with something.
I've had most of these tunes for a couple of years, so I'm so used to hearing them without lyrics or vocals, so it takes a while to adapt to the change.

TheBeubi
5/15/2018 11:34:35 PM

Glad you like some of what I did. How would you like to proceed? I'm flexible. B.
Shattered Image
5/15/2018 3:18:53 PM

Yeah i definitely like the sound of it. As you say, some more lyrics and maybe add some melody or solo. With the lyrics I'd like to keep them very contradictory. For example. "All alone, with everyone else" "At the dawn of night". I like how you did the chorus. I think that works well.

TheBeubi
5/13/2018 1:26:05 PM

Hi,
This is just an idea using one of your lyrics. It's all a bit roughly mixed and there are still a few gaps which have to be filled with lyrics and maybe an instrumental solo. Let me know if you like it or if I should trash it.

TheBeubi
5/13/2018 1:22:27 PM





Shattered Image
5/12/2018 1:26:59 AM

To be honest I have no idea., but by the feel I think it needs to be a little bit random. To me it sounds like someone has either had a bump on the head, is delirious, drowsy, tired.
Maybe sang from the point of someone sitting or lying on a bench in a subway or city street, singing what he sees through his drowsy eyes, and every now and then slipping into a dream or hallucination, then back to reality. Then finally falling asleep at the end.
This is only a random idea, so you don't have to go with it. Might spark an idea.

TheBeubi
5/11/2018 11:54:28 PM

Hi, Nice tune! I'm not the most gifted vocalist but if you want I can have a go. You can always trash it later :-)
Any idea what the song should be about? 

Shattered Image
5/11/2018 2:31:48 AM

Just some lyric ideas to try out if you like, or try your own.











Shattered Image
5/11/2018 2:29:15 AM

shattered image has updated the song concept.

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