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Hey there, i did a demo of your lyrics. I hope you dont mind. I am going to track it with a female voice. Let me know if you like it and i will continue otherwise i  can change the lyrics.

Regards

Hitch

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This ones for you 3.66 MB765/28/2008 10:43:00 AM
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Click Image to view full profile This is just a rough sketch I came up with. I'm kinda digging the beginning but the ending (sucks) still needs allot of work. I had this weird phrygian idea that I'm not sure if it make sense. I was also playing with the spacings between then pre-chorus  and the verses. Give a listen and let me know your thoughts.
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Rough Sketch Demo 2.15 MB725/3/2008 11:44:00 PM


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This ones for you

Lyrics only. Looking to put music to words have tried my self but i am not happy w/ it . It was written in a progessive rock style but can be adult contemp. as alot of my writting have ended up to be. Dont ask me how, but thats what most of my critics say. Maybe im sending them to the wrong people, so i thought i would give this a try.  

Verse 1;

So much for wasted words,

i feel so empty in side,

and after all our broken dreams,

all we have are dirty lies.

Verse 2;

So much to be self asured,

now your love has gone astray,

i never been so unsure,

now that you have gone away.

Pre-chorus;

I never knew what it meant,

to believe in you,

i never knew what you meant,

when you said you want me too,

i never knew what that meant,

all i hade to be was true.

Chorus;

This one's for you,

Oh//////// This one's for you.

Verse 3;

And days go by i sware i tried,

to hold on to you,

i count the time oh that i cried,

im still missing you.

Verse 4;

The nights are long and still as cold,

do our memories still remain,

and after all that weve been through,

can we fall in love again.

Repeat Pre-chorus;

Repeat Chorus;

Solo;

Out lyric's;

when i look into your eyes,

i see our love it cannot die,

when im holding on to you,

i feel i could touch the sky,

i never knew what you meant,

now i believe in you.

 

 

 

Musical Genres
Alternative, Rock


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lilith 5/29/2008 7:32:00 PM

John and Hitch.

Wait a minute! Theres somthing missing ,It took me a while but i do recall i had written out lyrics for this one. Maybe there not posted but im sure of it. I dont wanna go back and listen to my self. So can the two of you see if it will work.   


SharkBoy 5/28/2008 11:26:36 PM

Hitch,

I dig it. I think it is better then my version.  It probably fits the vibe of the lyrics allot better. Maybe we can spin my version into something else.


lilith 5/28/2008 11:39:50 AM
Love it! Please continue. cant wait to hear it w/female voice.

hitch 5/28/2008 10:43:16 AM
hitch has uploaded a new Mix with the label This ones for you.
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Hey there, i did a demo of your lyrics. I hope you dont mind. I am going to track it with a female voice. Let me know if you like it and i will continue otherwise i  can change the lyrics.

Regards

Hitch


SharkBoy 5/7/2008 11:13:32 PM

This is a great help!

I will rework the chord progression to better support the vocal melody. It will be a few days before I can get this up. But hopefully I can have something by the weekend.


lilith 5/7/2008 8:07:10 PM
lilith has uploaded a new Track with the label This ones fo you.
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Very rough vocals. But this is the tune i had in mind.Except it cant be play like that, because its a knock off of S.Bach of Skid Row. I re-work the out lyrics to fix the end speed i think. Go ahead tell me what you think, and no comments about my vocals.

 

By the way after listening to John's track i began to like it, but your right about the end. Thats is why i re-did the out lyrics. Hope it works better. 


SharkBoy 5/3/2008 11:44:17 PM
sharkboy has uploaded a new Mix with the label Rough Sketch Demo.
File Description:This is just a rough sketch I came up with. I'm kinda digging the beginning but the ending (sucks) still needs allot of work. I had this weird phrygian idea that I'm not sure if it make sense. I was also playing with the spacings between then pre-chorus  and the verses. Give a listen and let me know your thoughts.

SharkBoy 5/3/2008 10:01:10 PM
I have come up with a baseline for this tune. I am working on it right now. Should have somethng posted in a few hours.

SharkBoy 5/2/2008 12:36:54 PM
Any thoughts on the vocal melody? I can start by framing something out on an  acoustic guitar and then we can discuss it.
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